Wednesday, 4 March 2015

My Christmas

The Sun


Was blazing hot and I could feel


The fire burning of my skin


And the sweat running down my


Legs.



Family


Roaring with laughter,


Caleb annoyed me like a chimpanzee


Using me as a toy.



Tom


Jumping on me,  it felt like


A car smashed my back.



Eli


Still opening


His presents like mad.



Nonna and poppa


Still squeezing Hannah


To death.



Hannah


Still kissing me


Like she loves me like mad.



Mum


Roaring, saying


“You need sunscreen!”



Tuky


Licking me


Like I'm a bone



The silver tin shed


Shines in the sun


Like a great winter’s day.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome poem Max. It's so discriptive that it reminds me so well of being at Nonna & Poppa's farm. xx

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