Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Luminarium

       Luminarium 
I stood at the entrance of the Luminarium,a big bulging object that waves in the wind like waves coming and going on a beach. It looked like a massive inflatable castle like the one at inflatable world. It looked huge from the outside and I was bubbling over with excitement. I couldn't  wait to go inside.

The silver fabric of the luminarium was shining in my eyes like a car's reflection of the sun. The lines and shapes painted on the fabric made it look 3D. I was jumping like a monkey with a big bunch of bananas, I was so excited.

The bright colours beamed in my eyes like the reflection of the water when you’re looking down from above. The shapes on the inside of the luminarium glowed brightly and moved like the sun rise.

I could feel the really cold breeze coming out of its massive fan. It felt as powerful as spa-jets when they are pushed against my back.

It connected with me in a way that it inspired me to do something like it.


     


2 comments:

  1. I hope everyone who went to the Christchurch Arts Festival read this Max. My favourate was the big green room.

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  2. Awesome language Max! Really cool to see you experimenting with some sophisticated language and similes, adding interest for the reader. It definitely made me want to read on. Great to see you are a good writer as well as a football star!

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