Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Rules

           
This term we were writing about a speech, my speech was about rules. I was learning how to speak louder when I'm telling the audience my speech. I think my learning is at relational and multistructural because my speech is well organised showing connection and flow between all important parts of speech structure, and many ideas connect to the point of view, and my speech uses several language device to persuade and to connect with the audience.

Please click here to listen to my speech or read below
https://soundcloud.com/waimairisounds/rules
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        Rules

Are you sick of people telling you what to do? Like when your mum or dad say’s go tide your bedroom or stop watching tv your times up or maybe go to bed,this makes me feel like they think I can't look after myself. They invent rules not only to make us feel this way but to not let us do new things.

This is why I think rules are bad, what’s your opinion on rules?
Well there once was a time when I wanted to buy a game called, call of duty black ops three, well what happened is that we were going to the shop to buy the game and then my mum saw that it was R16 that really I mean really drives me up the wall. And when I mean I'm willy wonka's with my mum I mean when she said your not aloud to buy it because it is r16.
I wish that the person who made rules never did because rules are bad, well that's the way that I see it.





How can we change rules?

We can change rules by proving to adults that we are good kids so then the take away the rules but then you or maybe even me would just break them and then we would be told off by our parents, but if there was no rules then we wouldn’t be told off.

Lollies

I wanted to break the rules one time and I was going to take some lollies but then when you think about it you're just making yourself unhealthy if you eat too many lollies.



What do you think rules are

Well I think rules are something that most kids do not like, because they don’t like being told what to do. For example, when you want to climb a tree, but then your mum or dad says “Get out of that tree you might hurt yourself!”  Bla bla bla, whatever.


This term we were writing about a speech, my speech was about rules. I was learning how to speak louder when I'm telling the audience my speech. I think my learning is at relational and multistructural because my speech is well organised showing connection and flow between all important parts of speech structure, and many ideas connect to the point of view, and my speech uses several language device to persuade and to connect with the audience.

Please click here to listen to my speech or read below

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        Rules

Are you sick of people telling you what to do? Like when your mum or dad say’s go tide your bedroom or stop watching tv your times up or maybe go to bed,this makes me feel like they think I can't look after myself. They invent rules not only to make us feel this way but to not let us do new things.

This is why I think rules are bad, what’s your opinion on rules?
Well there once was a time when I wanted to buy a game called, call of duty black ops three, well what happened is that we were going to the shop to buy the game and then my mum saw that it was R16 that really I mean really drives me up the wall. And when I mean I'm willy wonka's with my mum I mean when she said your not aloud to buy it because it is r16.
I wish that the person who made rules never did because rules are bad, well that's the way that I see it.





How can we change rules?

We can change rules by proving to adults that we are good kids so then the take away the rules but then you or maybe even me would just break them and then we would be told off by our parents, but if there was no rules then we wouldn’t be told off.

Lollies

I wanted to break the rules one time and I was going to take some lollies but then when you think about it you're just making yourself unhealthy if you eat too many lollies.



What do you think rules are

Well I think rules are something that most kids do not like, because they don’t like being told what to do. For example, when you want to climb a tree, but then your mum or dad says “Get out of that tree you might hurt yourself!”  Bla bla bla, whatever.




















































































































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